[SFS] Re: 2nd draft of Linux Camp flier

[Gary Romero]

Dave,

I'd drop the "Some Reasons..." section, or shorten it to only talk
about the cost savings. Then use the space to talk about what the SFS
is.
Gary Romero


On Thu, May 30, 2013 at 11:27 PM, David L. Willson <DLWillson@thegeek.nu> wrote:
> 2nd draft
>
> https://zimbra.thegeek.nu/home/dlwillson@thegeek.nu/Shared/SFS
>
> And the reason I want this to look good is that I want you to have something
> nice to show your boss, when you ask him to help you pay for class (or you
> ask him to sponsor someone else, or whatever).
>
> ________________________________
>
> I'm out of steam, and I'm still a dozen lines too long, AND I'm still
> unsatisfied with the front page! Bah, humbug.
>
> If you're in the mood, please have a look at it. My goal is for the front
> page to be attractive and simple, with the core information clear, ie: We're
> going into the mountains to study Linux and hopefully, send everyone back
> with a basic Linux certification under their belt. Maybe I should've said
> ~that~.
>
> The second page is more wordsy: What's so great about SFS and Linux Camp and
> answers to common questions.
>
> If you want to do a draft, you'll need LibreOffice. Otherwise, just tell me
> I'm too wordy when I'm wordy and too terse when I'm terse, which I already
> know... :-)
>
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> David L. Willson
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> This is a good time for a r3VOLution.
>
>