[SFS] Re: 2nd draft of Linux Camp flier

[Gary Romero]

Sorry, David not Dave. I know too many people I think.
Gary Romero


On Fri, May 31, 2013 at 12:54 PM, Gary Romero
<randomincolorado@gmail.com> wrote:
> Dave,
>
> I'd drop the "Some Reasons..." section, or shorten it to only talk
> about the cost savings. Then use the space to talk about what the SFS
> is.
> Gary Romero
>
>
> On Thu, May 30, 2013 at 11:27 PM, David L. Willson <DLWillson@thegeek.nu> wrote:
>> 2nd draft
>>
>> https://zimbra.thegeek.nu/home/dlwillson@thegeek.nu/Shared/SFS
>>
>> And the reason I want this to look good is that I want you to have something
>> nice to show your boss, when you ask him to help you pay for class (or you
>> ask him to sponsor someone else, or whatever).
>>
>> ________________________________
>>
>> I'm out of steam, and I'm still a dozen lines too long, AND I'm still
>> unsatisfied with the front page! Bah, humbug.
>>
>> If you're in the mood, please have a look at it. My goal is for the front
>> page to be attractive and simple, with the core information clear, ie: We're
>> going into the mountains to study Linux and hopefully, send everyone back
>> with a basic Linux certification under their belt. Maybe I should've said
>> ~that~.
>>
>> The second page is more wordsy: What's so great about SFS and Linux Camp and
>> answers to common questions.
>>
>> If you want to do a draft, you'll need LibreOffice. Otherwise, just tell me
>> I'm too wordy when I'm wordy and too terse when I'm terse, which I already
>> know... :-)
>>
>> --
>> David L. Willson
>> Trainer, Engineer, Enthusiast
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>>
>> This is a good time for a r3VOLution.
>>
>>