[SFS] Re: 2nd draft of Linux Camp flier

[David L. Willson]

Thank you for the feedback, Gary. I'll look at it again tonight. A little time NOT staring at it should help, too.

--
David L. Willson
Trainer, Engineer, Enthusiast
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This is a good time for a r3VOLution.

----- Original Message -----
> Sorry, David not Dave. I know too many people I think.
> Gary Romero
> 
> 
> On Fri, May 31, 2013 at 12:54 PM, Gary Romero
> <randomincolorado@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Dave,
> >
> > I'd drop the "Some Reasons..." section, or shorten it to only talk
> > about the cost savings. Then use the space to talk about what the
> > SFS
> > is.
> > Gary Romero
> >
> >
> > On Thu, May 30, 2013 at 11:27 PM, David L. Willson
> > <DLWillson@thegeek.nu> wrote:
> >> 2nd draft
> >>
> >> https://zimbra.thegeek.nu/home/dlwillson@thegeek.nu/Shared/SFS
> >>
> >> And the reason I want this to look good is that I want you to have
> >> something
> >> nice to show your boss, when you ask him to help you pay for class
> >> (or you
> >> ask him to sponsor someone else, or whatever).
> >>
> >> ________________________________
> >>
> >> I'm out of steam, and I'm still a dozen lines too long, AND I'm
> >> still
> >> unsatisfied with the front page! Bah, humbug.
> >>
> >> If you're in the mood, please have a look at it. My goal is for
> >> the front
> >> page to be attractive and simple, with the core information clear,
> >> ie: We're
> >> going into the mountains to study Linux and hopefully, send
> >> everyone back
> >> with a basic Linux certification under their belt. Maybe I
> >> should've said
> >> ~that~.
> >>
> >> The second page is more wordsy: What's so great about SFS and
> >> Linux Camp and
> >> answers to common questions.
> >>
> >> If you want to do a draft, you'll need LibreOffice. Otherwise,
> >> just tell me
> >> I'm too wordy when I'm wordy and too terse when I'm terse, which I
> >> already
> >> know... :-)
> >>
> >> --
> >> David L. Willson
> >> Trainer, Engineer, Enthusiast
> >> RHCE Network+ A+ Linux+ LPIC-1 Ubuntu
> >> Mobile 720-333-LANS(5267)
> >>
> >> This is a good time for a r3VOLution.
> >>
> >>
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